Before: 'Managed database systems and performed maintenance.'
After: 'Maintained production databases serving M users, achieving % uptime and reducing query response time by %.' Same job, completely different impact.
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Transforming weak bullets into strong ones
Before: 'Managed database systems and performed maintenance.'
After: 'Maintained production databases serving M users, achieving % uptime and reducing query response time by %.' Same job, completely different impact.